5 paragraph essay
2 pages and a half minimum
thesis MUST be the last sentence of the introduction (please)
Please try to stick with the same ideas in the body paragraph because if it is completly different then it’ll be impossible for me to hand the paper to my instructor
this is the rough draft:
Artists are a main reason for spreading the minority's voice and belief and this minority group is usually the artist's origin or country. Bob Marley is considered an artist that spread the minority's voice across the globe, Jamaica. Bob successfully accomplished his goals and now Jamaican culture and voice is recognized by the majority of the world. Therefore people started respecting and admiring Bob for such a great accomplishment. Therefore, artists are expected to represent the minority of their people and culture. Secondly, the middle or low-middle class part of a society occasionally would need their voice to reach the upper-class people or government officials for many reasons. Political disagreement or perhaps even war could be one of those reasons. Therefore, great people like the famous Pablo Picasso would draw paintings that indirectly communicate with the government and their officials and spread the middle-class's demands and needs. This shows how people started to depending on artist to reach the rather more important people using art. Last but not least, without art speaking for the minority of society, religions and valuable information from our ancestors would so vanish throughout the years. Writing is considered a form of art which has been saving beliefs for thousands of years. For example, people who dedicated theirlives to write down and print the words of The Holy Bible are considered artists who saved Christianity from vanishing as the years passed by. That being said, people started expecting artists to represent or store their beliefs and cultures for future generations to benefit from them.