Guidelines for developing a Personal Development Plan (PDP)
You are required to develop a Personal Development Plan (PDP), which includes goals for the development of your academic skills after the completion of the module. This should include skills we cover on this module. To help you, write down the strengths and weaknesses you listed in EAP 1 in the box below, which can also be from your feedback. Use complete sentences.
Capability of composing a huge variety of the academic compositions. The academic compositions tend to display the various qualities of the good quality assignments.
The display of the various quick learning skills that are needed for the completion of the assignments that are allocated. I generally do not find it necessary to attend a number of lecture sessions in order to understand the given topic.
Capability of completing the assignments within the given deadline.
Collaborative nature of work while working within a team or a group.
The organisational skills need to be improvised.
Demonstration of obsession with certain tasks at times.
Demonstration of the highest levels of perfection in solving certain assignments which might result in the heated discussions with the other team members.
Demonstration of a dominating attitude at certain points of time during the completion of the given assignments and desiring to do the assignment all by myself.
On the economic front various experts are of the opinion that the government of the country might experience a significant amount of relief in situations where the health care is sponsored by private organisations. This helps the government in focussing on other sever issues such as defence, education or immigration.
Handing over the control of public organisation like NHS to a private front is likely to increase the costs incurred by the various charges included in the healthcare business. The patients who fall under the economically backward class would experience high difficulty in availing these healthcare facilities. Published in the year 2014, the Commonwealth report suggests that among all the health care organisation operating in the country the NHS is the cheapest so far. This goes against the privatisation of NHS thus confirming it to be a wrong decision. In addition to this the latest information from the largest insurance-based policies of the UK, ascertain the fact that privatisation of the NHS is unlikely to strengthen the faith and trust of the people of the country in all matters regarding health care.
On the contrary privatising NHS might proceed to an increase in the employment rate of the country as a whole in various health care fields owing to the fact that the youth of the country are more interested towards employing themselves in jobs that cater to the serving of people. Experts have also ascertained that privatisation of NHS have paved the way for increase in competition in the quality of health care provided to the patients.
Week 5: Developing your arguments: Combining sources
Strengths in academic skills
Using the summaries you wrote in the previous task, combine them below to create the first body paragraph of your essay. Use the guide below to help you and highlight each part with the same colour. (250 – 300 words)
What is the counter-argument of this issue?
(this is the opinion you do not agree with)
What is the main argument if this issue?
(this is your opinion)
Why is your argument stronger than the counter-argument?
What evidence/examples do you have to support this?
What can you conclude from this? What are the implications?
You should use at least 2 sources in this paragraph.
On the economic front various experts are of the opinion that the government of the country might experience a significant amount of relief in situations where the health care is sponsored by private organisations. This helps the government in focussing on other sever issues such as defence, education or immigration.
Handing over the control of public organisation like NHS to a private front is likely to increase the costs incurred by the various charges included in the healthcare business. The patients who fall under the economically backward class would experience high difficulty in availing these healthcare facilities. Published in the year 2014, the Commonwealth report suggests that among all the health care organisation operating in the country the NHS is the cheapest so far. This goes against the privatisation of NHS thus confirming it to be a wrong decision. In addition to this the latest information from the largest insurance-based policies of the UK, ascertain the fact that privatisation of the NHS is unlikely to strengthen the faith and trust of the people of the country in all matters regarding health care.
On the contrary privatising NHS might proceed to an increase in the employment rate of the country as a whole in various health care fields owing to the fact that the youth of the country are more interested towards employing themselves in jobs that cater to the serving of people. Experts have also ascertained that privatisation of NHS have paved the way for increase in competition in the quality of health care provided to the patients.
Well known for providing free health care to UK residents, NHS is the most sort-after organisation in terms of health necessities. But privatisation of NHS would mean no more cheap or free services to the patients of the country. Hence non-privatisation of health care service should be focussed on in order to help the needy patients of the non-creamy layer or poor strata of the country.
Weaknesses in academic skills
This is an in-class activity. Please upload a photo of your notes here.
Write a summary about what you have just listened to. (No more than 100 words)
Write a response to the opinions given. (No more than 100 words).
Week 7-9: Writing your argumentative essay
Using the same process you did for the first body paragraph, complete your essay below.
One of the major topics for debate amongst the citizens of the United Kingdom, independent of their economic and social status is the privatisation of the National Health Services (NHS), UK. Experts and learned men who argue in the favour of this privatisation are as equally available as those who argue against the motion. Founded in 1948, the National Health Services is an organisation that supplies the country dwellers with relatively low-cost health services. As is natural in a debatable atmosphere, some residents hold the view that the NHS should be privatised to showcase the procuring of the diverse credibility and competency skills. However, against this set of belief, are citizens who feel that this privatisation might not be a proper decision on the part of the government as that would indicate a seizure of the citizens’ rights to a healthy life without having to tackle the various economic aspects that are linked to the same.
PESTEL analysis of the organisation under consideration is required for analysing the merits and demerits of the NHS. The social as well as the economic factors have important roles to perform in the crucial analysis of the feasibility of the proposed privatisation of the National Health Services.
As the matters concerning the health have an important role to play in the lives of various people, social factors included in the privatisation of the NHS becomes important to be taken into account. The merits and hazards of such privatisation can be analysed properly by analysing the social viewpoint of the decision.
On the economic front various experts are of the opinion that the government of the country might experience a significant amount of relief in situations where the health care is sponsored by private organisations (Burton 2014). This helps the government in focussing on other sever issues such as defence, education or immigration.
Handing over the control of public organisation like NHS to a private front is likely to increase the costs incurred by the various charges included in the healthcare business. The patients who fall under the economically backward class would experience high difficulty in availing these healthcare facilities. Published in the year 2014, the Commonwealth report suggests that among all the health care organisation operating in the country the NHS is the cheapest so far. This goes against the privatisation of NHS thus confirming it to be a wrong decision. In addition to this the latest information from the largest insurance-based policies of the UK, ascertain the fact that privatisation of the NHS is unlikely to strengthen the faith and trust of the people of the country in all matters regarding health care (Johnston 2018).
Arguments for privatising NHS
On the contrary privatising NHS might proceed to an increase in the employment rate of the country as a whole in various health care fields owing to the fact that the youth of the country are more interested towards employing themselves in jobs that cater to the serving of people (Gosling 2013). Experts have also ascertained that privatisation of NHS have paved the way for increase in competition in the quality of health care provided to the patients.
Well known for providing free health care to UK residents, NHS is the most sort-after organisation in terms of health necessities. But privatisation of NHS would mean no more cheap or free services to the patients of the country (Hunter 2016). Hence non-privatisation of health care service should be focussed on in order to help the needy patients of the non-creamy layer or poor strata of the country.
The people in favour of the privatisation usually are of the opinion that this privatisation has a chance of increasing the powers and authority enjoyed by different privately-owned business farms (Kirby 2014). As a result, this might improve the inter-communication between the patients and staff at various health care centres. Smith and Peedell (2014) in support of the motion, state that privatisation of the NHS might aid in decreasing political interventions, thus ensuring corruption-free delivery of health care services which shall also be transparent in their nature.
However, the other experts are also observed to be opposing such ideas by arguing that this privatisation would only lead to an increase in the cost of services thus lowering the variety of services that are provided to the patients under consideration (Reynolds and McKee 2015). A point to be noted is that the ranking of UK in the area of rendering services to the patients can serve as the chief issue in negating the privatisation of NHS. However, there is deficit of substantial evidence of the fact that the privatisation of NHS would lead to improvement of health care services rendered to the patients.
As is evident from the above discussion, privatisation of the National Health Services is highly unlikely to be successful for the government as a whole. The above composition lays down the arguments both in favour of, as well as against the issue of privatisation of NHS from the socio-economic point of view. It can be easily inferred from the economic analysis that the privatisation of the NHS would reduce the health care to a profit seeking organisation thus losing its true motive of selflessly helping the needy people. Therefore, from the above discussion it can be easily deduced that the NHS should maintain its duties in the same way as it has always been since its foundation. Furthermore, the state is recommended to concentrate more on the way the services are rendered to the common people of the country.
Reference List
Burton, J., 2014. Partnership or privatisation? An NHS Trust’s experience of sponsorship. Gastrointestinal Nursing, 12(2), pp.37-44.
Commonwealthfund.org (2014). [online] Commonwealthfund.org. Available at: https://www.commonwealthfund.org/~/media/files/publications/fund-report/2014/jun/1755_davis_mirror_mirror_2014.pdf [Accessed 19 Mar. 2018].
Gosling, J., 2013. Privatising the NHS. International Socialism Journal, (139), pp.77-97.
Hunter, D.J., 2016. The slow, lingering death of the english NHS: comment on” Who killed the English National Health Service?”. International journal of health policy and management, 5(1), p.55.
Johnston, I. 2018. Scale of private treatment at NHS hospitals revealed. [online] The Independent. Available at: https://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/politics/nhs-privatisation-health-service-exposed-private-cancer-patients-hospitals-treatment-work-government-a7974096.html [Accessed 19 Mar. 2018].
Kirby, T., 2014. Controversy surrounds England’s new NHS database. The Lancet, 383(9918), p.681.
Reynolds, L. and McKee, M., 2015. Is the NHS really safe from international trade agreements?. BMJ: British Medical Journal (Online), 350.
Smith, R. and Peedell, C., 2014. Is the private sector a good thing for the NHS?. BMJ, 349, p.g5865.