Provide Part 2: Revision of Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages (3-4 pages)
Revise your Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages, using feedback from the professor and classmates.
Develop Part 3: Possible Disadvantages, Answers, with Visuals (1-2 pages, for 7-9 total pages)
State, explain, and support the first disadvantage to your solution and provide a logical answer. This should be one (1) paragraph.
State, explain, and support the second (and third if desired) disadvantage to your solution and provide a logical answer. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
Include one or two (1-2) relevant visuals that help illustrate an advantage. Note: You must include a minimum of one (1) paragraph explaining the relevance of the included image. The responsibility of the author is to justify the inclusion (not to let the reader “figure it out”).
Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
Provide a concluding paragraph to summarize the proposed solution, its advantages, possible disadvantages, and answers to the disadvantages. Repeat or paraphrase your thesis statement.
Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
Use one (1) or more rhetorical strategy (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain claims.
Support disadvantages and answers with at least two (2) additional quality relevant references. Use at least eight (8) total for Parts 1, 2, and 3. Note: Wikipedia and similar Websites do not qualify as academic resources.
Your assignment must follow these formatting guidelines:
Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; citations and references must follow APA or school-specific format. Check with your professor for any additional instructions.
Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and the reference page are not included in the required assignment page length.
Note: Submit your assignment to the designated plagiarism program so that you can make revisions before submitting your paper to your professor.
This is comments from my teacher.
–Please be mindful of your formatting. The entire Running head should NOT be in CAPS.
–We went over this. Why would these standardized regulations be effective? Give the audience three supporting ideas.
-Cellphone USE, NOT “uses”
–As per paragraph 4, what is the point in mentioning the number of users, and the addiction, if there isn’t any information regarding laws, punishment, or addressing the addiction.
-In the next draft we need to have a cohesive paper. The headings are misleading, especially the summaries. We need to see a conclusion page for this assignment. Also, there need to be clearer transitions. Please pay attention to comma splices.
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