I have an essay which is about ( describing myself in one word ) Please skip the collage part. From my outline you will see examples I want the examples to be completed and I need them to be real life examples. My word is Responsbility.
Introduction : Make the sentence structure better
Thesis : please make it better by saying ( I am reponsibile in many aspects in my life and use synonym for reponsibile.
First paragraph : is about my family . I want you to describe how Im responsbile towards my family since im outside the country ( like skype them twice a week)
Second paragraph : about my car. I pay my insuarance on time I clean my car and respect the law, driving with my license and paying for regestration .
Third paragraph :about apartment. Paying rent . Keeping it clean and neaty paying rent insurance buying furniture and building it by myself
Fourth paragraph : You will have to talk about my college and combine it to my country and how reponsibile I am especailly that I am scolarship student . example: I have to maintain good grades and don’t get lower than 2.0 GPA. I do my assignment on time and register for classes on time and before deadline
Conclusion : summarize the essay in two or three lines then talk about how will I be responsibile in future like ( work, family , wife childerens… )
Make sure to follow the instructions which is in laka. pdf file
The file scan is my outline make sure to read it.
Please make sure to follow the instructions carefully and use easy words.
Please make it 4 pages no less than that I know it says 3-5 pages on instructions but make it 4.