Hi I have finished a part of my final draft of my paper and only need to revise and add some content to my paper. I need more than 600 words. The prompt and rubric of the paper is below. And the attached is the part I have finished.
Prompt: Do you tend to speak up? Identify a context or situation in which you tend to speak up or refrain
from speaking up. Discuss why you choose to speak up or not to speak up in that particular
context.
In crafting your response, consider how factors such as personality, feelings, family, culture,
education, and/or societal pressure may affect your decision.
While writing your paper, you may find it helpful to refer to the following chapters in
Knowing
Language
: Chapter 3 (Argumentative Writing), Chapter 12 (Writing Cohesively), Chapter 13
(Revising, Editing, and Polishing Your Writing).
Rubric:
Content and Organisation:
Includes adequate introductory information about the topic
Includes a clear thesis that responds to the prompt appropriately
Organizes and develops the topic/argument logically and thoughtfully
Demonstrates understanding of the class text, connecting it to the topic
Makes sufficient use of the class text for support
Reflects original ideas and critical thinking
Includes a conclusion that engages the readers
Demonstrates progress through the drafting process
Presentation and Language:
Uses tenses correctly
Uses specific verbs such as
claims, argues, suggests
as well as appropriate vocabulary
Varies sentence structure effectively and uses cohesive devices such as pronoun
reference, transitions, and parallelism appropriately
Is well edited for grammar: few basic errors with nouns, verbs, pronouns, and
prepositions
Follows punctuation and MLA conventions, including correct use of quotation marks
Shows improvement in grammar and punctuation during the drafting process